Saved by the face

Im not and never good in doing tittles to make my story interesting. My story for this post is about ghost. This is my composition that my malay teacher asked me to do. He started the first and second half of the paragraph. Not all the way about ghost though. Just see how it flows.


I was driving back home from my friend's birthday party. I was alone on the road. I looked behind via the centre mirror. Then, I saw something.

I saw my friend that passed away few days ago. It distracted me. I wonder if she's the real her or it's just disturbance. I ignored the face there. There was a car infront of me. The driver is so slow. I wanted to overtake it. I didnt look back and just overtake. I didnt know that there's a car behind me untill we collide each other. The crash was real bad. I smelt smoke. I wanted to get out of the car but its too late. My car exploded. After few minutes, the other guy's car also exploded.

There was a lorry driving towards us and saw the explosion. The driver in the lorry called the fire brigade, ambulance and then police. In 5 minutes, they arrived. One of the paramedics carried me out of the car. He placed me in the ambulance and drove off stright to the hospital. The policemen called my family that I had an accident. My family visited me everyday while I was in the hospital. A lot of my skin are burnt. I stayed in the hospital for about 2 weeks. Good thing im still alive. Is the figure I saw protecting me or what? Miracle?

In one of the nights, I woke up at 3am. It was so dark. I on the lights and read while I lie on the bed because I cant sleep. Suddently, I saw the face of my late friend whom I saw in my car before the accident happened. I rang the bell for the doctor to come and I told him about the figure I saw. He said its just my imagination. Then I told him that I wanted to go home. He agreed and called my parents to pick me up.

On my way home, I told my parents what happened in my car and in the hospital. They also said its just my imagination. When I reached home, my mom said that she's bringing us all the family to Australia for a holiday. She told me that I can enjoy and have fun there. Dad also said that I can forget about the figure that I saw. In few days, I really forgot about those weird figures like ghost and all that. Happy life.